Friday, October 16, 2009

The Amazing Adventures of Lightning Man!

(For those of you who were not in class when we did this prompt, it was for the girls to write a story that would appeal to young boys, and the guys to write a story for young girls. So this is my attempt at a "boy story")

Lightning streaked across the sky! It was Lightning Man, shooting lightning from his eyes to destroy the evil mucilaginous being that was coating the entire city with saliva, vomit, snot, and other bodily fluids. Lightning Man grabbed Mucus Man in his iron fist, but the slimy creature just slipped out of his hand. So Lighting Man called in his super friends, Boulder Man, Fire Hair Man, and Lobster Claw man. Boulder Man threw rocks at Mucus Man. Fire Hair Man used his flaming hair to try and melt Mucus Man. Lobster Claw Man used his lobster claw to try and cut Mucus Man to pieces. But none of it worked. There appeared to be no hope! Lightning Man threw his lightning spear at Mucus Man, and it killed Mucus Man. The city was safe at last!

2 comments:

  1. This thing gliched and did not put my name, but this is Rachel

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  2. Hi Rachel, I like this one! Even though I'm not a young boy, if I were, I think I would read this many times over, and run around pretending that I am red hair man.
    ~Christy:)

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